Need Critique & Criticism with design and layout
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Comments (29)Hi Jess Jess Congratulation on your purchase on the foothills of the Otway Ranges is a great location and a flat site is a good site to build on. Doing all your doors at 870 is also a great idea - they will work with wheel chairs, hopefully you will never need them. Its a good size for a door as long as the occupants do not put on to much weight in the aging years requiring bigger wheelchairs. (I have some experience in designing for disability). Doors at 1050 are much better but it does require a bit of extra space and the doors will add to the cost a bit as they are non standard. As other have suggested a mud room and three bedrooms are really a good idea, you can always turn the non use bedrooms into a studio, theater, guest room etc later on when the boys leave. It is a great approach to get ideas, to design the house, however I think that when you consider your brief, designing the whole site might be a better approach. What I mean is that you have to consider lot of external issues like, water harvesting and position of tanks, onsite sewage management of grey and black water, composting bins and maybe worm farming, tools storage for garden and maybe a propagating area, solar cells and on site power storage, as you get nothing these days for pumping up to the grid, maybe an eatable garden design, reference to flora and fauna, also there may be other animals on the site (pets), and the fire issue. There seems to be a lot going on on the peripherals as much as the internals of the design. As for a being advised of the oncoming possible bush fire, I would strongly suggest that you build a fire shelter, and hopefully you will be advised in time and leave before the fire comes - and never have to use the fire shelter, and it will be the best money you have wasted in your house design. It would be good if you could get some separation from your "remote working office area" , from the main house. I have been working from home for about 20 years and I find that a little separation from the main house helps in maintaining - work away from home - concept. Although you might plan for your clients never to visiting you, situations can change and maintaining a separate relationship between live areas, and work areas, may be beneficial in the long run. As your views are to the west, good verandahs which connect to living and outdoor activities may be a solution, your second design seems to incorporate this idea, and it might need to be extended especially for the rest of activities that might occur on the site. There is certainly a lot to think about, you have a fantastic site, I hope you will take full advantage of the possibilities. Regards Michael Manias - Manias Associates Building Designers - mm407p@gmail.com...See MoreCritique My House Plan
Comments (28)Hi spmm, "I agree about getting help but be aware that building designers have NO accreditation in Australia and can be appalling practitioners and very expensive. i speak from recent experience in regional NSW. Architects may appear to be more expensive but are capable of delivering a better result." That is an appalling description of an Association that is registered on every state in Australia and has an Australian representative Association in Canberra, based on your personal experience - unless its based on self interest. To the best of my knowledge all Building Designers that do Working Drawings must have Professional Indemnity insurance to provide working drawings for a building Permits, which is the only accreditation in my opinion that carries some worth for the clients, and like all organization they can be included and expelled from their respective associations and are accredited by their organizations. As for them being "very expensive", generally I would say that the buying public is no fool and people that do not deliver are generally out the game very quickly . You might like to inform yourself a bit further on this by contacting any of the Building Designers Association in your state or the Australian body, some are included underneath: Australia: http://www.nabd.com.au/ Australia: http://www.bdaa.com.au/ Victoria: https://www.bdav.org.au/ (may include Tasmania) Queensland: https://www.bdaq.com.au/ South Australia: http://www.bdasa.com.au/ Western Australia: http://bdawa.com.au/ Northern Territory: http://www.bdant.org.au/ Michael Manias - mm407p@gmail.com Manias Associates Building Designers...See MoreKitchen layout advice needed
Comments (48)Sorry Darlene but that's just no good...........a big part of the problem here is your trying to keep the cut out alfresco/outdoor living that is at odds with the style you are trying to work with, and it's causing the squeeze/compromise to the main central internal living spaces. There's nothing wrong with this type of thing in concept but they require experienced hands to resolve elegantly as opposed to a clunky way.... Refer to the plan I posted earlier - there is not one dogleg to be seen. paths of movement are streamlined and neat and proportions and alignments are balanced. What you've proposed above here walking straight into the dining area is not a good option and it makes your house feel smaller - this may be justified in situations say when you have no space in an apartment or unit scenario.........your on 2 acres or something? - your home should feel appropriately scaled and with space to breathe....... There are different plan configurations that will meet your particular brief requirements but the problem you have is that you are locked into this particular perimeter that has developed and then in the process of trying to sort it out you keep forcing/rejigging everything within the same shape/format that is actually not a fixed thing Here are your options: (a) seek some pro design guidance with a professional who understands the style/language you are working with - but don't be surprised if the nominated budget is exceeded in a custom format (b) explore some alternative options what siri & I suggested in considering off the shelf solutions of similar style that may be more aligned with your budget (c) keep going the way you are doing your head in fumbling around trying to DIY design your home but clearly falling short of your vision Best of luck!...See MoreHouse plan critique
Comments (14)@dreamer - love the suggestion regarding the doors and we will be considering this. Regarding the ensuite, I do agree it’s a security concern, and definitely agree it will improve the layout of the ensure, however, it’s one of my “must haves“ as I’m a bit of a clean freak and want to avoid tracking dirt/sand through the bedroom. I did consider having a third shower at the back of the house but I really don’t want to have the responsibility of another shower I need to clean. @Sanjee Naren - thanks, yes this is the plan for the doors. Regrading the ensuite, I am concerned about taking space away from the WIR as I would like to maximise hanging space. We have to have a single hanging rail, rather than one on top of the other so that the clothes arent too high up due to an injury. @macyjean - I’m sad to hear that you think the floor plan is “bad” however, for us and the way we live, it ticks so many boxes. We are outdoor entertaining people so we want the main living area to open up to the backyard as much as possible, if we were to put this on the north, we wouldn’t be utilising the backyard to its full potential as would defeat the purpose of us having purchased such a large block. We have had extensive conversations with the council regarding the tree, however, the only way they will consider the removal is if we submit two completely finished plans, which is both time and money we decided not to spend. We did consider a curved driveway, however, it would be too close to the root system of the tree and would be a pain to drive in and out of. Also, as we’d like to have drive through access to the backyard, if we were to put the garage on the south side, we’d need a massive driveway on the longest boundary of the block which would end up being a lot of wasted space. At least with the current drive through access, we have the ability to include a little courtyard/ garden outside our master bedroom. @Jane Monte - I appreciate the suggested floor plan, however, it would take away many of the items in our wish list. I’d rather not have a third shower to clean, I’d like to maintain privacy in the master bedroom with not having the entrance to the room being straight off the hallway, and we‘d like the hallway to open up into blank space, rather than at the island or the kitchen table. The kink in our hallway would also break up the length so it doesn’t feel so daunting. @me me whilst I’d appreciate the view of the pool, if we switched the master, I’d be concerned that we wouldn’t have the privacy we want as it will open up straight to the backyard - an area in which we spend so much time in. Also I’d be concerned about noise being so close to the main living area. @Kate I have considered moving the entry of the bathroom, however, I’m concerned we will lose too much hanging space in the wardrobe. Regarding the doors, great idea and we’re considering this. Good point about mistaking the garage door for the exit but the people that we’d have over would be over frequently enough to get used to our floor plan. I also agree the guest room has poor access, but have decided it‘s a compromise I’m willing to make and guests will just have to deal with it as I’m not keen on having another toilet to clean. Haha good point about the name “playroom”. We use it for the kids in our current house and have just become used to it but I get your point @C P not yet, but when the kids get older, we would do...See More- 11 years ago
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